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alexisneo May 9th, 2011, 7:12 am

urrr I hope you guys will come to like Lune OTL
I guess I've been having trouble with her character alot because in the original storyline I wrote she was actually a guy XD So I've been having to make a few changes in her character~
Well, I like her anywho :)

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Pyua May 9th, 2011, 9:05 am

Lune's alright. (:
Great story!

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sala218 May 9th, 2011, 9:59 am

i like Lune a lot :D

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Rubygem May 9th, 2011, 11:00 am

Of course you like her your the writer. nice page

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Kibouchi May 9th, 2011, 11:37 am

i love her. she's so sweet~

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sekoshi May 9th, 2011, 3:48 pm

I don't get why people are blaming Lune. It's not like she put the bullet in his head. :l Maybe she was a distraction but either way I'm sure it would have ended the same.

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Snowwater May 9th, 2011, 4:42 pm

I don't personally adore her or dislike her, I guess we still haven't seen enough of her to be sure how she's like... some people judge too fast.

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teurastaa May 9th, 2011, 8:59 pm

So far she's too plain to be a mary sue o-0 odd that she's called that. I think it's better that she's a she and not a guy. I think I'd hate the main character if it was a guy XD hahaha Good choice on lune!

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Sakqia May 9th, 2011, 10:58 pm

I like Lune!

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But I like Eric more...just sayin.

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I like Lune

Xiera May 21st, 2011, 5:18 pm

Lune is no where near a mary-su. To me she seems really believable. So far she's done everything I would have done in her position. Does that make me a mary-sue too? XD